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A Kitten

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Eyes wide and full of Spring,
Tender footsteps of whisper.
Fire burning in her eyes
As she stalks invisible prey.
With a crouch, and a stretch -
she darts!
Faster than sunlight
the beat of her heart.
Short and quick poem about a kitten x) What do you think? I've tried to include more imagery/metaphors here, has it worked?
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pmadison's avatar
Wow, I'm talking care of three kittens. This piece really describes them all perfectly. You have a wonderful style.